After a lot of feedback to our presentation, we started to think a bit more about the suggestions. Keeping some, but decided to throw the other comments away.
Jamie and I sat down together and added some more shots and rearranged some others. And the story got better.
Got some feedback from Paul, our teacher, which was very helpful and constructive. Added some shots after that as well.
I think this short actually will work in the end, with all the finished animation.
You can watch the first draft of the previz at MIchael’s site
oh thank you very much for that knocked out sliding on-the-back happy sheep!